The Beginning After The End [ON-GOING] - Reviews

"I'm Jigoku no Fubuki... you know what that means right?" Fubuki said arrogantly.  

"My alter." ?At first I thought it was a split personality but then I realised it was an...MC inside an MC! That blew my mind. ?The writing style is good but I think you should slow down a bit when describing so it doesn't smack readers.

A very  good novel with interesting story. very good writing quality and i Hope WE get more chapters. keep up the good work author. ???

There are only a few chapters for now yet the book is quite promising. The fight scenes are all well-written and I really like that the author was able to put some challenges to develop the MC even though the MC is overpowered or destined to be one. Also, the author specified how the MC will get his Harem. That's nice I think. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.

War-type novels always have both a glorious and tragic side. I hope we get to see it all unfold!

just loving this book and drama ? both .The character and plot is great

Great start to this novel! Immediately got hooked from the first 4 chapters of the story! Writing quality is amazing as hell, BUT you could still improve by making use of more conciseness and sharper prose. Dialogue as natural, as it should be, and I really like how distinct your characters' voices are. Now, it may need some work on characters' appearances and the world-building, BUT you could always do that in the later chapters. Aside from that, keep it up man! I can see great potential in your book!

really nice book, wish had more comedy though