If you stop writing this novel, I'll come and find you and torture you till you start writing again, do you hear me @DaoistZenFeng? don't test my patience lol, just kidding, the story is good and I like it, don't drop it.
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I did not read this book but the synopsis says it all. You want to avoid talking in the past tense when writing a novel. Also avoid switching between them in the same sentence
Hello there lovable readers. I'm seeing a lot of positive opinions here and it's nice to see it.Well if your good hearted at least also say your opinion as a form of review pls hehe. (I am so mischievous)
This story has potential. The protagonist looks like a 1000-year-old virgin when he finds himself being used by a beautiful girl, but it is acceptable, since she is the only one counting him with the supernatural world.If you realize that everything he experiences is new to him, then you will not hate this story: Remember that he was gaining little and was only eating, sleeping, and working for your all life.Usually all MC cares about their life first and then their shortcomings. The MC took a while to realize his shortcomings, but he quickly corrects them.The novel's progress is also acceptable.
He found a few rifeles and swords better than the ones he got from his father so he decided on taking them along with the golden ornaments and decorations, bullets, map drawing devices and other usefull looking items before long he stood in front of the chest behind the table
Yi Yun could smell the young girl's body fragrance as he laid on her back; it was different from the aromas that came from perfumes or body lotions city people used, it was a fresh smell, made up of wildflowers and soil. It was refreshing, at first he thought that she was giving him anal .
