The Awakening Paradox - Reviews

This story will have action at some point, form the description and reading here, construction could be improved. feel like he will meet lot more people and overall tone is light. more update

all I can say is, good concept but lackluster writing. The 'owner of a magical shop' troupe is interesting but the phrasing of the words and grammar pulls one out of the storyI really like the concept so if you want me to edit some chaps for free hit me up on discord: Daoist RedSnow#2180

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The author is here to shamelessly give himself a good review. Also, he'd like to report the first six chapters have all been rewritten.Please feel free to leave a comment here.this story is open to suggestions, as we all try to make this work the most overpowered work on the site.Hope you enjoy it!

Even if the story is good, for me the translation and mistakes in writing kills it. Please hire a good editor who knows his job.Please improve your English

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love the characters personalities and the storyline

"Sorry was just remembering my master."

The story development is engaging and well-paced, blending action, mystery, and character growth. Kiran's journey through the dungeon with its unique levels and formidable bosses adds excitement. Interactions among diverse characters create rich dynamics. The protagonist's hidden power and the group's evolving camaraderie keep readers hooked, anticipating the next twist.

The world stood dazed.....