The Awakening of Mortals - Reviews

I just love this novel it was my first ...️

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Well still fresh ,soo i will say ,whats next, you hace a vote and a chance to go big.I tought about the same thing before and i wanna ser Joe thats played información tour mind     Good luck and gods speed.

It is basically impossible to read the book without having headaches, putting aside the regular errors seen in most books, the punctuations are literally absent and what's with the '

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I'm curious about the answer to the synopsis.The most precious things in the world are priceless. Ordinary men tend to turn a blind eye to this fact. Apart from the treasured air, sunlight, and familial love, there is still one more thing that’s extremely valuable. It’s right beside you and can be easily obtained. But... I wonder whether you can see it?

I agree with the others can't recommend this one.Premises is very good but bad execution.Dude is such a bs. He is the strongest being in the world and he is still acting as a school security guards and just because he is used to thatIts a no go for me but do read if you want

Interesting, good background and has lots of potential, but the author is still in his infancy when it comes to writing.Info dump everywhere, description of important events are ignored, characters are the most fake I have ever seen. Forced bullying, forced situations, no credibility at all.The Mc is dumb, ignorant of his own powers and is a suckrr for girls. Even the good old cliches are badly done here.The grammar and English of this, is almost umbereable. Needs some seeeerious editing to become readable. But again, is has potential, but the author seems to never have read a good written novel before. Maybe in the hands of a different writer, this can be a good gem.At last, good luck author. Hope you become a hellaof writer and comes back to redo this one.Good luck.

The plot is interesting but I find the characters childish and gullible.  The grammar is also very horrendous and this is the worst part.  Although the story is interesting, the grammar is really annoying and worsens the story, even if I’m able to read it.

The plot is unfolding quite nicely. Love the little anime references here and there. Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters. Kudos to the author!

I remember I was heading home and then blank...

"Don't open it!" I yelled, the two of them a quite surprised by my burst of emotion.

However Saturday and Sunday are special days since I have enough time to write SIX chapters. So the big question you gotta asl yourself is this...how do we decide who gets the two special spots?