The Author's Descent - Reviews

i love the story... thanks to the writer!!!

This is one of the best fan fics I have ever read, the plot follows the source very well while adding a nice spin to it. The powers given to midoria are really interesting and the writing/hammer are both very well done too. My only problem is that midoria is given new forms and abilities in a bit too rapid succession. Apart from that great work ?.

although this has a good start, i don't recommend it.. me, personally, dislike it when mc goes full servant/man-slave the second he sees girl... this may seem like i am overestimating the servantness of mc, but truly, i am not. i may be a narrow-minded no-life for thinking like this, but so be it, because i couldn't even make it to ch. 70 without convulsing and turning off my computer... but that is just my personal opinion. other than that, rest is ok i guess, but really can't deal with that bs where the mc goes way out of his way for no apparent reason because the other party is female... and so blatantly at that.. oh well, maybe its just me.. if you are into this kinda stuff, by all means, read it! but if you as much as a little bit dislike this, then leave now an clear your browsing history! out of sight, out of mind.

Give me the raw link. I don’t care if its in hard to read english, let me have it. stop being stingy author and deleting all the links people post.

I do not have the whole idea of the story but the game is so dumb. Who can ever play a game like this . This is really a bad one and I really do not like it. It's kind of exaggerated too

10/10 very good a lot of lemon high quality writing hot characters and a varietys of personalities and the lemon scenes are very hot and sexy

Your cover makes me rage??Now let me open and read

this book is so addictive I could read it all over again several times over.

I like how you outlined your character in a design that would be relatable to your readers. Personally, I love a main character that could make me feel something and that's what made me feel about him. Moreover, as I read through the novel, it was very easy to read, resembling a feel-good novel, the type that would give the readers a sense of relief and belonging, I guess? I've read until chapter 2. Until now, I'm very intrigued at how he will carry out his life in this new world, not to mention, as a janitor. However, some sentences seem off-putting in terms of tenses. I suggest you be consistent with this one as this may distract your readers' attention in the novel. Regardless, to me, they aren't worth mentioning compared to the novel's premise itself. But still, work on them if you want to improve your writing skills further.Overall, it's very interesting. I have already added this to my library and will read this in my free time! Good job, author! :)))

This is the absolute best translated novel I have ever read. I've been on sites like Webnovel, WuxiaWorld, Gravity Tales, Fanmily, RoyalRoad etc for a couple years now. Webnovels are a tough market, and with monsters like  Teng Jia, IET, Er Gen, Cuttlefish who authored this book can easily be ranked right up there with him. As a heavy reader of all fantasy Novels, the only book this can compare to, to me is The Name of the Wind, a massively successful western novel. These are as of now my two favorite contemporary books, and I am excited and ecstatic to see the rest of this book. The Lord of Mysteries lacks absolutely nothing. Character development is insanely good and each character will rip your heart out. World background and development are right up there with Tolkien. The plot is unforced and extremely intricate with many relationships subtle but obvious once they're revealed to the reader. All in all the best read in a long time. My one and only complaint about the novel is that I feel the aspects of his transmigration are a little unsuitable with the flavor of the novel as it drags on. Humor turns dark very, VERY, fast.

Marcus: I belive you :/

Christina was torn up viewing the man sobbing in pain, she never knew that Collin was this sensitive. All hard as he looked outside, his inner core of the heart was fragile.