the stories is good , but i think its too much unnecessary details , you can make it more simple and easy to understand... sadly the updates kinda slow for me... women and harem development also good , at least his harem not a vase and have a lot action...
The most novel I've been waiting for right now.A novel full of good, non-copycat characters that make you love it.And character thinking is adult thinking that's rarely seen in this kind of novel.Most other novels of this kind have a disabling mind that can't come from a reasonable person.That's why I love your novel.
Found about this story from the authors main account(Abadom) in one of his ff, zero fate, cos i couldnt wait for a week for the ff to update. Although i havnt read it yet im pretty hopeful since all of author’s other ffs are well written and the plot is god-tier. Overall im excited to start.
the story is good grammar can be problematic a bit, but we ain't here for English diploma are we~~the protagonist is relatable, the game seems fun overall a good read
by reading the synopsis I thought this is gonna be interesting (I don't know though if I understood the synopsis correct ??). I started reading it and I cannot understand the thing with the "-" you put all the time,got time to explain this?
Despite the hope I had at the start, the story is poorly written. Moreover, it is full of problems : baseless arguments used to justify things in the plot. If the author had at least not talked about his arguments in every part of chapters, it would have been better. The idea behind the plot is great, but it is poorly used. On top of that, the English is bad.
