While the story is kinda rough in the beginning, but it gets a lot better once it gets going ( but it almost always moves slow)and I love the way this author writes the the harem members,for the most part anyway. But what made me stop reading was, the author did something that will make me instantly drop any harem book I read no matter how good I like it and that was, the MC got an ancient dragon spirit, and around 300, the MC and one of his harem members were being intimate, and then the Dragon spirit started giving him pointers in real time, like just no, I simple don't like male spirits in the MC's head in harem novels, it's just creepy.