The assassin's Bride: Beneath the ice - Reviews

I haven't read far but honestly the translation is just horrible and makes it unreadable in my opinion. Sometimes I really have no idea what a paragraph is even supposed to mean and the gaming terms are just complete **** (e.g. blood volume instead of HP like wtf).The last chapter i read seemed to be explaining the world background but i understood just about jackshit.

So far from what I've read it's seems to be a really good story and I feel it could go far. Keep up the great work and sending out chapters. Love you man

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He still wasn't sure what to do with the civilians during the war or what to do with them after they won the war against the Humans. He knew that Not every Human was despicable since he already met a kind one.

     Gerig shrugged off the explanation and dropped the subject as he knelt beside the big knight. As Gerig slowly removed the knight's helmet, the cause of death was easy to identify. The armor had only been mildly dented from the jolt of the lamppost, and had taken no damage to the chest. It was the fall that killed him as his neck had broken upon impact with the ground.

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And then Yuuichi tries to make a Conversation and it was about doggo/max.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

thirty. I don't know the name for a number that big. The Avogadro

Zalaria began to take a bit of eat of the food displayed before her with pure joy.

The story is great, the pacing doesn't feel rushed or slow and the dual perspectives really enhance the reading experience...... Keep going like this and readers will love your book soon.