The Archetype Of Eternity - Reviews

Sorry for the long review but this my first ever review i have ever written. I don't know about other people but when i read a web novel, i put my self in mc's shoes and think of myself as the protagonist of the story, that's why i mostly read wish fulfillment novels (where the mc gets a harem of virgin girls, dealing with enemies ruthlessly , having iron balls of courage and other general stuff that can never happen in real life).So when i saw the title of this webnovel i immediately refused to read it even when the story description interested me. But my curiosity got the better of me and i read it. And quite frankly it depressed me, i mean who wants to be cucked, humiliated, beaten up and be a wimp. so i wanted to stop reading it .BUTthe plot was very interesting, so i went through the depressing parts just in hope that mc becomes a badass and quiet frankly i was impressed by the character development of the mc.Though he hasn't become a badass, he is on the path of becoming one. i recommend people to read this novel for it's interesting plot and character development.NOTE TO AUTHOR:- i don't care even if joanne was forced or blackmailed into have *** with reid . i just don't want that bitch to become mc's woman , at present mc cut off friendship with her which left me satisfied but if i see any signs of her becoming mc's woman i will immediately drop the novel no Matter how interesting the plot is.

Best novel this week(4.5 star).Please chose this novel, even if it lacks racism( Everyone knows that Webnovel has a preference for xenophobic novels)

petition to bring back 60 chapters......,...........,.................,.................-------filler . ......,.............. filler filler filler

Good story with an “omg this MC is a idiot”. For a while he is a smart MC with luck with the ladies then he can’t figure crap out a few chapters later.   And it’s really bad and obvious.  Author leaves giant plot holes all over the place and the MC doesn’t seem to remember anything from more than 3 chapters before.  Save your time it becomes crap after a while

This novel remembers me the author One, who wrote One punch man and mob psyco. Is in it own way fast and awesome. I feel it is realy intetesting even if the story is measy, or even senseless sometimes. Author keep on, I like this novel a lot.    Walter.

I couldn’t stop reading, and the author gives you just enough to pull you along while leaving you questioning what will happen next. I’m major into bl etc, and the author likes to swing that tantalizing morsel of everyone’s interests in each other right out of reach. Augh. But still painfully worth reading!

He sees a beautiful young lady at the counter.

Her face shook again as she combed over his hair, "It's alright Wukong, the killer has long been killed by my hands, I'm no longer the same girl I was when he killed my family."

Lisa gazed out over the Caribbean Sea, feeling the faint breeze against her face-eyes shut, the white sand warm between her bare toes. The place was beautiful beyond belief, but it was still unable to ease the grief she felt as she remembered the last time she had been here.                                      She had married James right here on the spot three years ago to the day. Dressed in a simple white shift dress, miniature white roses attempting to tame her long dark curls, Lisa had been happier than she had ever thought possible. James was even less format but utterly irrresistable in creased summer trousers and a loose white cotton shirt. His dark hair slightly ruffled and his eyes full of adoration as his looked at his bride to be. The justice of the peace had read their vows as they held hands and laughed at the sheer joy of being young, in love and staying in a five star resort in the Caribbean island of the Dominican Republic. They had seen the years blissfully stretching ahead of them, togethet forever. They planned their children, two she said, he said four so they compromised on three (two girls and a boy of course) ;where they would live, the travelling they wolud do together - it was all certain, so they had thought then. But that seemed so much long time ago now. A lot can change in just few years- a lot of heartache can change a person and drive a wedge through the strongest ties, break even the deepest love. Three years to the day and they had returned , though this time not for the beachside marriages the island was famous for but for one of its equally popular quickie divorce.                  Lisa let out a sigh that was filled with psin and regret. What could she do but move on, find a new life snd new dreams?- the old one was beyond repair. How colud this beautiful place, with its lush green coastline, eternity of azure blue sea and endless sand be a place for the agony she felt now?

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