The Apple of One's Eye - Reviews

A very interesting read for sure. Starts off slow and picks up some pace as you go. The story will definitely make you want to read more. There’s only 100 chapters so I cant say much on the overall world background but I’ hoping the author can pull through with something interesting and unique.

Good novel only new translater really needs to stick to old terms. Why the **** do you chance primal city leader to castellan. Some of the new translations doesn't make any sense in comparison to the old translation.

Currently at chap 94.Mixed on this one... I usually like when there is a bit of outside world story development but i feel in this case it's way too much and quickly becomes boring. The game aspect is great but after almost 100 chapters we had very little of it.

like the gamer comic, took a hour to find this but glad i did, really good writing and structure however it would be cool if it had more detail to the levelling system so it would intrigue the reader, well done!

It's a great novel with a story I haven't seen before anywhere else.The characters are unique and stand out from each other which is good as it doesn't get repetitive.The main character isn't overly op at the start and has a normal increase of power over time, which I found was done skillfully as he was powerful in his past life and the author made it so he couldn't decimate everything on his arrival to his new life.

im going to read your book it looks really interesting but most of all i like your synopsis and also good luck in your upcoming books!!......

Awesome cause I was nervous she was gonna be a bit toooo weird

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Yet, she was checking the landscape and the difference of the place between the future and now. While Song Mi change to her sport shoe and casual wear in the nearby toilet of the park, it is already 2.40pm.

'Ugh terrifying as always' Lukas squeak internally, trying his best not to show it to her, as he fear she'll tease him more. He took an envelope with the mark of the N.C.O Company, and gave it to her.

    "I know you're afraid..." Saitama said suddenly and Genos jumped at the statement, nearly dropping the futon he had just finished folding up. He turns toward his teacher slowly, his face is neutral but, there is something about it that makes Saitama's heart race, "It's fine to be afraid once in a while. To be honest, I'm a little nervous myself. But, you can rely on me to keep you say-"

"Where did that flying block disappear to?" Was the first question which shot out of the woman's mouth. She could clearly see the imprint on the ground in which it had landed.