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The Alpha's Secret Omega
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It's a great book, the story is very interestinga nd the characters are well made! keep up the good work ^^
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Really great job!! The author created a really good story and character, a big world where we learn with the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid every cliché without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. Still early but I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.
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I need raw...........................................
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I don't know what's going on here. Maybe I missed something cuz things got supernatural and everyone just takes it like "meh". It gave me a feeling that it was a supernatural world and superpowers are no secret. Unpolished writing and tons of plot holes around. Things seems to be too rushed and characters have no emotions either.
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This is fantastic, the development, and action scenes are very well developed, the character growth, and strength growth is really well done, and I can see myself reading this for a long time.
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A really nice story, good details, nice plot twists. Nice story.gshdudjjjffjidj jjdhdwios jhdbud jjdbds jhsdnd jjssjkw ijdjoeos jsjnshd hajjsid hkka jnedgdu uwoakbd hsjsjkfi jsks unskaos uskkajs ghwow
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Mariko first wanted to tell them about the words she remembered. "You know! I actually managed to get some of the words they have said!" She proudly told them. "Really?! Go on, Then!" Ayumi became even more excited, Chiho couldn't also wait. "Как тебя зовут! (Kak tebya zovut!)" Mariko said the first thing she remembered. "It means 'What is your name'!" Mariko translated the word in excitement. "Ooh! How did you know the meaning?!" Ayumi asked. "Takumi translated for me" Mariko looked at her to answer. The two repeated the word, Mariko didn't like how they pronounce the 'zovut' but She let it go. "Then we have.. Ты к нам присоединишься.. (Ty k'nam prisoyedinish'sya.. I think this one is about asking to join with you, to your team or something..." Mariko didn't got the full translation of the word at that time, She only remembered Takumi translating it. "Amazing... How can you remember all these?" Chiho asked in amazement, Mariko laughed, proud of herself. "I'm good at remembering things! It's like, My special ability, you know?" Mariko thought of more words while she talked. "Let's see... T-There's one more that Takumi didn't translate for me.. It's красивое.. и..имя? (krasivoye.. i..imya?) Takumi didn't even react to it.." She tried to make some guess on her thoughts. "When did they say that?" Chiho asked. "Um... When i told her my name, She answered with that.." Mariko answered. "Maybe that's her name?" Ayumi guessed. "I don't know.. But it sounds odd to be a name, to be honest.." Mariko thought of being called by it. "It's sounds weird.." She disagree that it's a name. "What do you know about them? They might have names that is different than ours!" Ayumi looked at the ceiling. "Since they talk in different language, They might have different naming style too!" She said. "Well, That's possible.." Mariko spoke as She thinks. "Still.. It sounds weird.." She still hates it. "Their leader is a girl, right? Imya.. Imya sounds girlish for me!" Ayumi raised her body and looked at Mariko. "Imya? No, it's not.. It doesn't sound a person.." Mariko objected. "It is! Imya-chan!" Ayumi said with a smile, Making Chiho giggle on her bed.
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At the end and before last paragraph I didn't got who was talking...!
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