The Alpha’s Power Play - Reviews

Great story so far but will he be bald forever? At this point he is still experimenting with his new found powers and there is a possible love interest.

Although it's imaginative(?) and has a bunch of positive reviews(possible fabricated), the grammar is horrible and the story development is forced and unnatural. I really tried hard enjoying the first few dozen chapters but they are too short, unentertaining and it seems like it's written by a fourth grade student. It would take a skilled editor to really improve it to readership standards. Most of the paragraphs contain sentences that are mostly filler words, irrelevant exposition and runoff sentences. The chapters are extremely short, mediocre and has a substandard quality. In my opinion, this novel doesn't deserve any of the positive phrases in its reviews. I hope the author can improve its chapters and make it more palatable. Until then, I can only give this a low score to offset the other biased reviews here so future readers won't get scammed into reading this.

the synopsis is different from the othe sign in novels as they just keep signing in a sect , this new plot is interesting and awaiting for the work✌?

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oh. ... author kun u back with another story. Good good. .I just hope you don't torture poor xin as much as you did to poor aryan. Well I read initial chapters and I am impressed. You have improved a lot.  Nice introduction... ... .keep up the good work .

"Yes but if we use your fossil around 70 to 80 percent, the factor of success besides we must have fossil pokemon, the physical quality of fossils also affects the level of success"

"You know are arrangement a month of work for the Items" the twins Spoke once again in unison "agreed"

"Morning LC , this is the Warrant Officer Alexander Zaitsev we will teach him how to be a proud fighter pilot of the republic air force"

I guess it's meant not to intimidate people into a heart attack. And just as the exterior is decorated in beautiful gold, so is the interior.

I have read up to chapter 35 and I am pleased with the story so far. The writing quality is pretty good with minimal mistakes (occasional typo). I would say this novel is more slice of life than anything else and I have enjoyed the Interactions between the mc and fmc. My only complaint is the word count per chapter, it feels too short. In one sense this is a good thing because I wanted to read more, but I felt the chapters could accomplish more with a higher word count. I’d recommend reading this.

I love the pacing of the story so far. I'm normally not into system stories but I love this one especially the MC. I did notice there are a lot of big words though and I might have had to consult the dictionary a few times? But heh, I did learn some new words. Also the chapters are very lengthy which I like. Overall, it's a good story and I can't wait to read more. Good job!

Multilead story are good but when it's not indicated whose perspective it's on its becomes cumbersome, I'm on the second volume it's a Good story author but you've got to do that indications.