Would have been a good story but the MC personality and just his sheer stupidity is too much for me. I mean he knows about general stuff in novels so why is he so dumb
new wibe about story settingsworld building is slowstory progression is mediumnew story linejust some loop holes in plotnew wibe about story settingsworld building is slowstory progression is mediumnew story linejust some loop holes in plot
I really like this story, so far, it was well written. but i couldn't say much about the character/story, since it's haven't developed that much. i'm looking forqard for the next chapter :)
"It's good guys you should come out now." He added as he dusted his cloth. Ofelia and others also came out from their hiding place they also dust their cloths as they seemed to be relieved.