the alpha mate - Reviews

Love it keep it up. Hope the ex wife doesn't use the child to get back in the relationship other than that more updates I like where this is going so far

This novel wasn't bad until the sudden nationalism that comes out of nowhere. You are reading along and BAM the author hits you with it just when you were getting comfortable. Ruins any chance of me giving this a shot because it will only get worse in the future.A solid read ruined by borderline racism and nationalistic views. Referring to Russia as "the whites" is not good.

A novel which is a shame to the name of novels written by a braindead f k who's after money...no context of a story just put together like a childs scribbles...

Amazing novel,......................................................................................................………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………

An easy to read novel with good narration and good plot, the sentence structure is on par with most of the good novels here, I hope you keep writing author this is great!

Getting ready for the social was harder than Sonja thought. Then again, it could be System who was constantly giving her fashion advice. Sonja admittedly didn't know much about fashion, but she definitely knew that you not supposed to take fashion advice from a piece of code who had never even had a material body, nevermind wore an article of clothing, in its life.

For Sophia part, she just cast a fire spell that burn her hair and the diarrhea spell too.

    "Yak Kim Hajoon! Jangan diam saja! Jawab aku!" Bentak Je Ah seraya memukul meja. Membuat Hajoon dan Yongsup terperanjat berkat bunyi keras itu.

" Ladies and Gentlemen ... Today we will start the Game Rating of the Uchiha Clan ... this will be one of the most important Rating Game of the Century, it will decide the next Heir and Leader of the Uchiha Clan ... today we will also have a very special guest, who recently became very well-known in Hell ... " The Narrator spoke, using a microphone and looking at the Bleacher, where it was full of People.

The purer energy generated in the garden couldn't be completely contained. The territory encompassing the garden would also receive slight benefits. Crops would grow healthier. The environment would become slightly more refreshing and so on...

"ASDFG"

And then they resumed it firmly.