The Allure of Other Worlds (Old Version) - Reviews

I love the storyline . The author is gifted at bringing her imagination to us readers. Updating stability is good. The world plot is intriguing . Great job author [img=recommend][img=recommend]

First of all, you need to know this story is written in play style writing, with asterisks instead of double quotes. Other than that, every thing is neatly summarized in chapter 1.

The story is interesting and I can see load of potential. However, the update is really lacking as it's taking forever for a chapter to be updated.

Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.

I recommend you all starting at (Arial) volume 2 new and improved besides (Jane and Stacey) volume 1. The reason I say this is because each chapter don't have much words in it in volume 1 but it's still fun to read if you want to read it.

Originally this was supposed to be about characters in diffrent time and dates in this world. So I’m going to try to focus on one character so to not to confuse the readers and make it easier on myself with all the character developments.

You have to be kidding me? this is exactly tge format for a manga, the short dialogues, easy to understand, beautiful and an easy read! your other book is light novel, and this one is manga. you have to be an otaku like me, author-san! i love your works, just because it's my favorite genre. you have to tell me, are you an otaku? i'll go ahead and bet that you are too. i love your works.

It is a wonderful story so fat I am enjoying it dear author you are an amazing writer who one in a million  book are been liked by me meaning you Ranie a fan of me and I don't usually read books like this nut as a first time trying it is an amazing book story I have read plz write a lot more your book are 100% highly appreciated by me plz continue to keep it up and  Be the best in the future and let perfection comes to you I rate this story so far 100% keep it up

Wow! first of all this book is completely different from other books I have read though it's not my type of book to read but  the author has written this book in a very simple way and easy to understand format 2 way conversation usually author uses pov to describe their story but this this simply is so amazing work. Keep up the good work.

I have to say, this system is kinda funny sometimes, you can improve more than what you are doing. there are shorts chapters but I feel That you mean by doing so. Keep doing a good job my dear!

Arial seems like a fun personality, and there are little to no grammatical errors that I've noticed. I look forward to reading more. I read only Vol. 2 as was told by author, but if Vol. 1 has same quality I will read all of that as well. [img=recommend]

Im not great with reviews but this story is great so far. Similarly to the ofher reviewers, I believe this story has a lot of potential. Though the chapters could be released a but more often, each chapter is great to read.

Sorry if that didn’t make much sense

Woah writer ! you are doing a great job. Your book speaks of its efforts. However the first chap was missing. Btw you will update it soon. The book really has potential. Hope this would be mass hit in future. Keep updating author. Best of Luck.[img=recommend]

Great character build up. A total page turner and lovely plot. This got me engulfed in the story, I love this one and thank you Author for such a good book

The story is interesting and I can see load of potential. However, the update is really lacking as it's taking forever for a chapter to be updated. I suggest author to try to write at least 1-2 chapters per week.