With much enthusiasm and avidity, the author presents us with an engaging story. The storyline, as well as the presentation and design of the characters throughout the story, continue to be appealing and winsome. Sadly, I do have to add that there are a lot of mistakes concerning grammar and vocabulary - and that’s alright, everyone makes them - yet I believe it would be a pity since this work has some potential. It simply needs to be polished into the gem it might be. I truly believe that this work could profit from an experienced and/or skilled editor so that it might develop into more.Overall, I find it to be a relaxing and engaging read, very suited for this platform. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.