seems good can't wait for more chapters!
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Amazing but i really hate the time changes and how The story wont go in order like tell me he got fire resistance before the fight not After but amazing regardless
I love everything I've read so far even the deleted chapters it's a great beginning to a story my only hope is that the author decides to write a lot more at some point
I like the story and the fact that there is more than 1 system holder..... it's different..... explanation about the world is less but the plot and the story is good.... good work
I really like the pacing of this. The MC is smart and lucky. but the luck doesn't feel like plot armour. I wish it updated more often and the side characters had a bit more feel to them. good job ^_^
Amazing story,to the way everything developed really loved it but you didn't really go in to details of the world,but overall everything was great wouldn't change a thing[img=update]
Pretty good.I like how its set in more modern times but i Guess thats just my preference. it has a consistent upload schedule so its pretty nice. tou should give it a try. i just hope he doesnt drop it. Im really enjoying it.
More because this is actually a good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!x !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!blbkbkbkvjhvhkjbhkmnbgjjb
this is well written. i like the pacing of it. a very good start. keep up the good work thank you for the novel i look forward to the development of the Mc. Please don't turn into a harem
This is very well written and thought out. The progress is slow however it feels right for this kind of story. I really enjoy the pacing of it. REALLY eager for more chapters keep it up author !
