Finally, a system that's not too OP. Very reasonable development over the trial chapters. I also like the humorous, slightly naughty, undertones that run through the story. It's not overdone and slap stick, just very pleasant. I hope this book gets chosen for sure.
Really detailed in my opinion ,Idk why a review has to be 140 character so ignore the rest of this review plz. Peanut butter jelly time Peanut butter jelly time Peanut butter jelly time Peanut butter jelly time
Through the projections he could see that the ship was hurtling through the thick grey mist. As the ship fell deeper into the mist frost appeared on the ship and temperatures began to drop. Cahir shivered.
Ito was the one who started talking as he said, "It's time to let my student roam the Underworld, and if he's ready, we can bring him to the human world where it is slightly more chaotic with all the Devils, Angels, Fallen Angels, Heroes and more."
it's been along day and me being a big but hole wants to have fun. so I decided that I'm going to the bar today. there's not a lot of people there when I arrive but the atmosphere is getting really intense. it feels like I'm up against to hot pussy or dicks. so anyways I find myself talking to a guy. he has brown hair and green eyes. he invites me back to his place
I'm fairly new to writing and decided to try something out online. 'Soul:A!' isn't going to be as long a story as the other novels, but I hope anyone who reads it will find it interesting!Since I'm a bit new to this, it would also help if I received feedback on how I could get better. I'm open to any form of constructive criticism ^^. Thank you for reading!
