The Abyssal Tyran - Reviews

This is awesome...great storyline, great character development, great plot development. Everything is just awesome except for me thing... There are many spelling errors. Nothing big. Keep up the good work ? ? ?

A bit simple but a nice read for the first 20 chapters. I want more!

The story itself was amazing.There were character development for everyone(except filler characters)The writing quality was top notch for me and the story itself was well plotted with amazing detail to everything.The characters were well built and the death of Luna was made to be very emotional.I mean,I cried a little when that happened.Call me weak but who cares this story is amazing.The story may start out slow and you may not get it at first but as the story goes on,it will make a lot of sense.The story itself is very engrossing and well thought out/planned.One thing though,there was a slight lack of missions from the app near chapter 200+(or more)Overall,a good read and an emotional roller coaster for me.

Estou gostando bastante, sei que está no inicio, mas espero ver momentos épicos atrelados ao desenvolvimento do personagem.Coisas como uma ponta solta, que depois de dezenas de capítulos depois, gere uma dor de cabeça que até mesmo nosso herói tenha dificuldades para resolver. Claro nada jogado, tem que ser bem trabalho e trazer novos questionamentos e informações. Acharia fod# se comedor de merda e seu mestre se unissem de alguma forma com os Deuses, fazendo Júlio não ficar tão confortável como está agora.

nice i was bored almost all of the apocalypse story's are usually all male lead's so supper good to have this story can't wait for more ?

I will give my honest opinion. I've always liked the science fiction genre, I'm glad one more author writes for this genre, so far I haven't read many chapters but I'm very interested in the concept of incomplete transmigration. I'm adding to my collection. I hope the author continues to make an effort.

I just need a fastpass and am sorry for doing it like this. My review should not influence the scoring too much as I chose to offer the rounded artithmetc mean. Hope it does promote the novel anyways. I can’t find myself interested in pure Romance but, seeing the many readers that do hope that you may continue to offer lots of enjoyment and value to them and wish you sucess with this Novel.

"You and Jenny are getting closer. What are you doing Miguel, are you going after her to make you know who jealous," Jorge said while elbowing me.

"you wanna touch it ,right…? Fu…fu…fu" [Aika]

These stories are a world on itself, I even tried my hand at writing fanfiction. One would assume with my vast knowledge of game resources and fantasy novels that writing a story is easy, I tell you it's not. Writing a story is a new world in itself, stories are fickle and almost the good ideas are already posted out there but nonetheless I feel like writing my stories even if they're not popular. Now enough about little old me, and let's get on with the story.

Nate jumped and soured through the sky. With his sliver necklace tucked inside his shirt, and his black leather jacket flapping behind him, he landed a few feet infront of Snow.

"Hahahahah, eu estou louco, só posso estar louco mesmo" Pensou o menino negando com a cabeça.