Overall good potential with poor presentation. The story would be much better with solid editing. The translation (presumably) needs work. A lot of the English feels clunky and flows poorly but it is still reasonably easy to read. Good idea and spin on kingdom building, despite the typical story arc. Some fresh mechanics. The characters have potential to grow.
Honestly, the translation is questionable, the names are butchered, but that's the best part of this trash, there's no redeeming qualities of this, i mean literally none.
look at how many books this Author has up for pilot reads. Seems webnovel really wants them on their website no matter what yet I can't think of anyone of them I've read
The FBI agents could not risk it,as they knew that I could have really done so."What do you want!"The same agent who commanded me previously asked,all the while another was messaging the Sniper,ordering he or she to stop shooting for now.
