I liked the story pretty much. The mc development is actually quite good.I lowkey like how the story is advancing.Although there is always room for improvement ??
Tried to read it the grammaR stopped me from enjoying the story it was SiMple stuff that would be easily Fixed by rereading the work, if you got annoyed by the constant capitals theN good luck
"I'll consider this, but do not speak of it ever again, I don't want my greedy brothers nor enemy spies to know of this." I hope it'll never come to that point... I sighed.
Later on I expanded, making my tower the central building from the enormous circular walls I built. Then I made some stairs coming on top of the inner walls so the animals could cross, as the normal zombies couldn't climb them.
