That Wasn't Supposed To Happen - Reviews

Finally! You did a rewrite of Zenith! I hope its better and more amazing than the other already amazing novel! Good work and good luck!! Cant wait to read the .ew changes.

It needs some editing as there are mistakes in the words but overall, I find it nice enough to continue reading.

It is good ignore the haters they always hater for no good reason keep going good job ——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

Yet another case of an interesting idea ruined by poor writing. Honestly this is one of the worst quality cultivation novels I've ever read, and that's saying something.

Writing Quality: Not bad but can be better (3)Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3)Plot Development: i cant say much bc only 8ch. but i dont understand nothing i think you need to add more text to pre-story or make lore deeper (3)Character Design: not bad but i cant inmaginate yourself ah MC (3)Prehistory of the World: sorry for repeat but you need more lore to understand what world it is (3)Verdict: not bad? but need a lot of work. I didn’t like it yet, I just can’t feel myself in the place of the MC, or at least cheer for it. I don't think I will follow it. but! I can wish the author inspiration and a light hand.

Please continue this story... Your first 3 chapters already make me curse because its only had 3 chapters. Please continue your, i'll support you for this story... I like this kind of story after all.

The writing style here is really creative and unique, while the story has a nice tempo to it-- all in the present tense. So it feels like you're right in the moment with the characters. It's really refreshing. I think the story and character development needs some work, but it's really pulling together with the more chapters that come out. Good world building too! Also, the author seems to be putting out a lot of chapters in a short span of time, so looking forward to making this one of my usuals!

It's actually quite good, I'm enjoying the read, I just have a little problem, the description of the characters, especially the women or members of the harem, we don't know if they are tall, short, if they have big, modest or small breasts, yes they have curves, a huge butt, toned, heart shaped, eye color, absolutely none of that has been mentioned, we don't even know if Allaire has wolf ears or tail or anything like that.I'm in chapter 15 btw, I hope and is changed that later, otherwise it would be a problem, if you can't describe them, then at least put a reference image in some auxiliary chapter

"LET ME GOOOOO!"

(What the hell I thought we where being attacked.….. wait why would you treat a baby like a doll)

Haruki began inspecting the rock all over and couldn't find anything special about it, he decided to figure it out later. Just when he was thinking about how to take it away, his Higgs released a bright light and the stone disappeared from his sight. Haruki went from excited to confusion to then feeling plain old enraged "AHHHHHH, YOUR MOTHER!" He was furious he spent this whole trip on the brink of death to look for this thing and it just disappears, there were more than a million ways to die here! Almost as if in response a tremendously loud howl came from the entrance of the cave, this howl shook the cave many of the diamond stalactite near the front of the atrium were beginning to crack and fall. Haruki came back to his sense quickly, looking at the rumbling walls of the cave he turned back around to find Ayumu. "What? I'm leaving right now! To hell with this!

[Small Stationary Railgun (need 7.0Ag to function): A small stationary railgun capable of killing a Level 10 Realm Knight or a First Order Warlock in one shot. Can shoot once every 10 seconds.]