That Thing it's a Big Partner! - Reviews

So I *kinda* feel bad for Wesley, but mostly he had it coming! Scar was def upfront about what she wanted with him and he purposely ignored her. Loved this chapter tho! Eager for the next ones

Please do update more often. I really loved the story so far.

This is good and I love how Emily’s story is going

I only rating this as FIVE STAR because....No Golden Trio being formed.The other fanfic Harry Potter and the Prince of Shadow were truly the most nerve wracking pain the a*s fanfic I've ever read on this site.So much bundled of hate I gathered to that wretched fictional character Ron.Seriously the author is ludicrous in giving more attention to that guy from OC's view like there's no tomorrow.So I dropped it and since then only reading Harry Potter fanfic that is worth without that despicable weasel.P.S. I despised Rowling for pairing Hermione to that redheaded idiot.

the novel is pretty interesting, looking forward to read the next chapters

"We've lost many people and we are still yet to find any coin, don't you think we should give up" it was zil. He always seemed to be afraid. Others looked at him and ignored him.

As Cænred sped off to find Lassen, Pyrelig scanned the horizon. It was too dark to see anything, but he liked to feel like the act somehow gave him command of the situation. Maybe one day the gods would bless him with the ability to see long distances in the night, but until then this would have to do. He'd planned for this eventuality for a long time. Dreamt about it, in fact. It was his moment to shine now. To show the King the benefits of re-manning the burghs and keeping a standing army. It was all well and good declaring your kingdom at peace, but to assume the world was going to follow suit? That was suicidal!

I like your book make more chapters

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'Goddammit! While his acting like a bad dog right now. Argh! His so cute' she's talking to herself.

Most of us have a fantasy which definitely fantasized us in someway or other .We are all captivated  by our fantasies to make it a reality. The protagonist of the story, Shanaya is a magnificent dreamer . like all other teenagers of her age group, she also had a fantasy .The following story reveals her fantasy.

"I'm going as hard as I can. I also know there are a lot of strong people on the Namek planet, including Frieza," Goku said earnestly.