Writing : 4Wasn't perfect, but was goodStability 4Read the chapter release pageStory development: 1This is the main thing that pissed me off about this book, I tried to love it, I love books with level and bloodlines, so this ticked allllll my boxes, but it was just soooooo drawn out, and the continuity annoys me, MC recognises game elements, but doesn't correlate other parts to game stuff, like lvl 1, with a % on the same line, recognises level as a game thing, and then actively wonders what the % is for.... Like wtf?!?Book draws everything out longer than it needs to, 1 chapter of other books takes place during 3-5 here, and they ain't even the short kind, and the MC doesn't seem to learn at all. Do X, turns out horrible, does X again, literally next chapter. like, wtf?He complanes about a gift that literally keeps him alive, every single chapter, usually multiple times, and for all the talk about wanting to know more, he never actually comes up with any ideas about what could happen or what stuff might do, he just says 20 times I need get a better idea before I decideCharacter design and world : generous 3, we're told literally nothing about the world other than bad shits happening now, which I figured out from title apocalypse, and MC is completely unlikable, and for a situation where his life has changed so much, and has been under so much pressure, he hasn't changed at all which triggered me, since we adapt really well under pressure, and he hasn't.
