Telos - Ragnarok - Reviews

48 chapters 9-27-23

I read the initial chap! Too intense! The argument of a Husband trying to become great from the past.Gran Arcana! I like how this story starts! Looking forward for more! Good Job Author!

Will be there spoilers because I just started book 2 ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

I've already read this for a while, but only recently I could give a review because I've been busy with my own novels. Nevertheless, this is a good book. It's themes match it's target audience, yet the storytelling technique is simple and easy to understand. Descriptions are being executed greatly. Sometimes they can be a bit too much and halt the story direction, but the information is there to slowly build up everything: characters,  setting, mood, etc. All in all, I'd recommend this for readers who want an action-adventure reading experience, but you may have to be patient towards the slow build up, because it is necessary to paint the clear picture of the story for you.

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Since there is a lack of chapters on which I can comment I have to make due with the present ones.First off, the writing quality is very good. No “obvious“ mistakes and the like. A clear structure with a broad range of descriptions. Easy to read and understand.The introduction is short and precise. No useless babbling about the MC's previous life.The update stability is unclear but we'll see. For now I'll give it 5 stars, since anything else would hinder its path.The story is quite fast paced for the first few chapters but luckily it doesn't seem rushed. Clear and well sorted, the story builds up a sense of intrigue towards the MC.Hand in hand with the story, the character design is, despite being at the start, satisfying. Traits and actions are well presented are catch the characters mood. Later on we will see the extent of the characters potential but the current impression is mostly good.The author avoids long descriptions and babbling, which helps the reading “flow“ and will hopefully stabilies the story. Without all that babbling the story will feel much more “genuine“.The last point. The world background is of course hard to judge since only 6 chapters have been released.We get to know quite a few things in those 6 chapters and I like the fact that they aren't presented in one moment. Often we have some old man the MC meets and suddenly we know everything we need to.The MC knows a lot of things by himself but has to sort them and cannot fully rely on them since they could be wrong or only partially true.He gets some information through some conversation etc. and not a huge amount.I am very interested in where this is going to end up.You have certainly captured my attention.???

O problema real dessa história é o fato que ele dominou totalmente a humanidade oque fez todos os seres humanos seus aliados ele doutrinou completamente e rapidamente investiu na área espacial em menos de 20 anos ele encontrou a famosa vida alienígena.

        "You look like you've been fucked." Kent said drunkily.

The self-proclaimed world's handsomest man was lying face down on the floor, with his buttocks in the air. The big bushy tail was literally standing straight.

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Nobody moved. Nobody changed their expressions. Nobody reacted. Nobody waved back.

Suddenly who turned to sand and well on the floor and turned back to human form and said "I am Gaara of the sand" "And I am Uzumaki Naruto of the leaf" Naruto said with proud. (Wow big brother Naruto looks so cool) Konohamaru thought.