tell me why me - Reviews

cool book, keep it up

This was a surprisingly good read. (read ~380 chapters rn)I thought this was gonna be a generic  "hide my OP power for no reason" kinda read but it gets really interesting as the story goes on.The whole "tame beasts" concept of the novel is over around chapter 50 and he leaves to a MUCH larger world. I'm not really a fan of modern settings but it's not there in the later parts of the novel since the "human race" that the MC spends the first part of the story is like an insignificant spec compared to the larger world.The MC is a battle maniac but the reason why is explained later along with the reason his system is the way it is. Everything is slowly being explained and the MC goes from over the top kinda hot-headed to more mellow and go with the flow as his power slowly reaches the peak of the world.Read about 100 chaps before deciding if this is for you or not

Cultivation Pet Shop Can you give this novel a proper ending?Cultivation Pet Shop When will you continue writing this novel?Even finishing it would be fine.

Woah! !! i am just gonna say that one of the major thing that sets it apart from many other eastern novel and most likely you are also trying to find that thing in  the eastern novels is that it has no cliche moments

A fast paced story that encapsulates many interesting sides of this mysterious world with a main character who has a pretty cool power that Isn't to over the top. Anyways can you get this novel out of trial, it's kind of fire, and I want more.

If someone edit this please comment here so I will know xD... The story is good and very creative its just that the grammar is.... LOLOLOSLOLSOALSOALS

Hello, Editor for this series here :3First things first, there probably isn't going to be any additional summary any time soon, so I'm going to write a few words about the novel.First, let's discuss the score. TL Quality and Update Stability... duh, of course it's 5 ^^ Well, to be honest, having read barely a few dozen chapters, it's too hard to say whether it's going to be good or awesome but the fact that the author didn't screw up at the beginning and did rather well is already quite good.So, let me say a few worlds about the story. The premise is that we have an average (more or less) guy who gets (not right away at the beginning though) an opportunity to become a cultivator. As the story is written by a woman, our male protagonist doesn't really resemble the arrogant Xianxia MCs (at least not yet), and feels more real, though the contrast may be a bit too big. Also, there is at least one love interest who seems like she'll stay in the spotlight as someone equal to MC instead of being shelved such as most male authors do, but it's too early to say whether it will be harem, love ******** or single love interest novel yet (my guess is that it isn't going to be harem). Generally speaking, at least so far, the characters aren't 1-dimensional and the author does a good job dealing with some annoying tropes common in Xianxia, perhaps because she's female and isn't (as) contaminated by those garbage tropes.Also, some may think that having a female author may be a drawback, but I assure that it's a normal story for male (or any) audience. It's definitely different, both the story and the writing style, but it doesn't get in the way of reading at all. Perhaps the only drawback would be the info dumps, but they're rare (I can recall something like three, four chapters--not whole chapters, either--out of sixty) and so far never repeated. As for the plot itself, it's still to early to tell since the author didn't reveal much yet at the point when I'm reading, but looks promising. Not sure what else to write about so I'll keep it at this. Oh, I'll just mention that the pace of the story doesn't seem to be too fast, but neither is it very slow.

If you have an insane amount of dedication, free time, and willpower, then the advice given in the early chapters will be immensely helpful to you.If you strive to write a poorly written, generic Chinese cultivation novel of the sort, this guide is perfect for you.All in all, this has some decent advice on basic writing strategies that absolute beginners or bad writers may need to hear. It's clearly formed around the strategy of appealing to the masses with a formulaic, and generic story based around wish-fulfillment however. This guide is absolutely not for everyone, nor should it be taken as solid advice on writing a "good" story.There was an error in punctuation on the very first line of this book, not sentence, line. In a book made to teach people about writing...

Nice good but I like medieval times better, with no modern technology. Why do I want to read about things that already exists. Well other then that it's a really good novel with nice grammar and stuff

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I’m doing this review for the author because he requested help in improving his writing. First, I know that it is hard to give a story a rating based on only a couple of chapters and you are new, but there is much that needs to be done.          The grammar of the story is bad. I’m not sure if English is your first language but there is quite a bit of incorrect grammar in your chapters. If English isn’t your first language I give you props as I personally know how hard it is to write in a second language.           The punctuation is not done very well. There is much that could be fixed, but the easiest thing is to break up the page with paragraphs. After you finish a thought you start a new paragraph, otherwise it feels like a run on sentence.         The story is only 2 chapters long, so at this point I can’t really say much as far as character development or even world background. You did make an attempt at setting the preface of the story, but I feel the grammatical errors made it less than it could have been.       I can’t really comment much on update frequency or anything either. The storyline has a similar feel to many of the online novels so I can’t comment yet if you will put your own spin or twist on things and have a truly original feel to it. I believe there is potential but you definitely have a long way to go. I hope this review helps you godtierfreak, and don’t give up. I’ll check on your novel at s later time to see how it has improved.