Teenage Mess - Reviews

Color me impressed..The story is immersive, the world background is beautifully fleshed out, logical MC, realistic conversation, oh and the reveals... Dem reveals are just awesome, the timing, the build up, the twists..That one chapter at chapter 55 convinced me that the author is truly a big brain.. Props to you author..

It's a well written novel.  The story isn't fast, but it flows quite well.   Characterization of the various personages is good, and the background is setup quite interestingly.  There is some intrigue and as usual 60 chapters is just not enough.  I highly recommend this novel.  There are no arrogant young masters, but there is an interesting setup, good MC, personable secondary characters and well written plot (so far).

The novel is basically a direct copy of Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top. The setting and plot was copied, commiting copyright infringement. It is a lower quality version of it too. Chapters (at least time of reading) were not edited that great (baddish grammar). With chapters being pretty short too, and so far it is just (essentially sameish) developmemt skipping the details in the original, I gave up on continuing reading. I like that some1 is contuing the saga os Elawn, but u need to at least make it fan fic or change a lotbof stuff, case u r stealing property and can get in a lot of trouble. Don't sign a contract either if stuff isnt changed, since I wouldnt be surprised if they take huge advantage down the road like debt+fines, at least credit the novel btw..

Translation is garbage, names and genders keep changing, the story is unoriginal and has been done to death, i honestly don't understand how anyone still reads this sort of garbage, we've had a novel like this every week for the past year.

Good read the script is broken down to finest detail this is a highly recommended.Author please never stop writing.I look forward to finishing this.

It's kind of a new way to start a story but nonetheless it's refreshing to see a new story, character building is also good, looking forward for more..

your book is very awesome, fascinating, incredible, marvelous, prodigious, and shocking.......I want next chapter ..?❤️

"No, no, nope.

bell: Kami sama don't talk while eating

Unlimited pokeball.. this is just the regular pokeballs? So he could have some extra cash selling 50-99+ pokeballs a day..

"That's the point honey! Now let's eat before we have to reheat the food a second time." He says just in time to see Eve walking out of the kitchen with food.

Yoongi stood up angrily and walked right towards you. You hated when he was angry but today you were angry too. You looked him in the eyes as he made his way to you and was about to finish your speech before he interrupted by shouting,