Taming The Mind and Your Destiny - Reviews

When will the next chapters be published. It's taking too much of time can't wait ?. The story development is as such that you are bound to get glued to it.

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really glad you started updating again.  I can start your 2nd book.  was holding off as it seemed you dropped this one.  great story arc, character's are very well developed!!! keep the updates coming

Good story .Very detailed .I have never read a NPC story ,but I liked it .This story has good potential .Keep it up author .We need more updates !!

I can’t believe I haven’t already given a review yet. This story is not like all the others it’s a high quality work of art. The description and story flow smoothly into dialogue. 100/10 for me would read multiple times!

This is definitely one of the best the Trial Reads have produced in a long time, the 'copying talents' concept has been done many times but a lot of the time the restrains and rules on the system stuff like "he can only copy stuff once a month" and whatnot where he gets a few good talents at the beginning and then its forgotton, this novel is way better,The MC can copy 3 Talent/Cultivation Technique/ Bloodline/ Skill (with skill level) FROM EACH PERSON every day, he can only copy 3 at a time and it takes time depending on how much of a gap it is from his current skill level for that certain thing or the certain requirements for it, and most of it is totally understandable, this copying system works by 'downloading' stuff, so it works like a wifi signal he has to stand near a person within 20 meters and it downloads faster if they are using the thing he is downloading or if he is closer, and you might be thing "oh thats so tedious how boring

I'm the author... Don't judge me XD ,.........................................................................................................

The story line is well thought out. The pace is good with no major leaps or large times wasted in single thing. Character development is going nicely, and no major contradictions with events or peoples action.However, some of the writing of “That spell”, “Use that”, and such is annoying. Its fine once or twice but everytime is too much. Specially since the next sentence it is named said soell. I know the author is trying for suspense, but here it is better to just use the name or such. For example, instand of saying “use that”, it would go better to say “use water guard” or “ use your new spell.”

Loving the novel so far, keep it up author!Dunno how to write a review well, so this is all, hahahahahahahahahah...                     

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"Should her highness utilize her Geass, perhaps thou might sense it."

"its ok jese dont wory i have arived here on the Air Force training school"