Tales of the DragonHeart: AshBorn - Reviews

A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..A good novel, quite enjoyable. Though I gotta say, the novels I like rarely get picked up..

Story isn't bad, just the translation and qidian updates are messed up. Especially the last few where its been days and they haven't fixed there fault.

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only problem I have with it is not much chapters everything else is fine and stuff thx for this novelllllll appreciate it

this look like it's going to be pure chaos and i love chaos my understanding from your description is that an mental unstable person have a voice in his/she? head  die for some reason now got a system too resulting in pure chaos lets hope I got it right

very good book now for 140 characters hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhgggggggghhggggggggyyyygygyyyyyyyyy

Really nice, but where's the rest now???... Thought it was complete, ooh God!!! Mira pls update now....????????????????????????????????????????????????????

first review!!!still need a lot of work in story building, chapter length also need some works. grammar is excellent, i haven't found any big grammar problem. let's see how far you'll make the story, goodluck!

The third clash at the formation outposts was similarly violent. Many notable Generals perished during this period, dragging along the enemy with them while effectively cleaning out 17,000 enemy vessels. The Oni Generals, Aruthos Krizathess and Pulosta Bessailes, two Witch Generals from Sanctuary 3, Helen Krizathess and Samantha Antoire, and three Ogre Generals, Orlo Vestanya, Stolisk Stalada and Voslovos Statens were amongst the notable generals who went Missing in Action (MIA) during missions, suspected to have died valiantly for the greater good. However, they had effectively delayed the movements of the enemy while buying more time for the citizens for migration by two months.

He continuously walked all around the streets, looking for the Ancient Sect that he knew of.

         The girl stayed silent, huddled in a corner. She had black hair reaching her upper neck and yellow eyes that shined like a wolf's, with black painted markings around said eyes. Her height was just average among them and she had a scratch scar on her left arm. She looked like an animal, though she was already in armor.

Awesome.