Taking the Mafia to the Magic World - Reviews

The beginning was pretty solid, but man, they really threw some random tragedy at the main character, which felt a bit forced. After that though, the story was moving along nicely, keeping a good flow. But as soon as the MC left the Village for the next town, things started to drag. Plus, the plot armor was so thick. The villains just kept messing with him, and all he did was think, "I'll remember this, I'll get you back someday," without really doing anything about it. Maybe the author wanted to show the MC's growth in excruciating detail, but it just made the story super slow and it's frustrating to see those villains keep coming back for more.

its more like hes forced to these bad deals, also he had to make these deals w/ counters to minimize the damage the bad deals he was forced to sign

I don't have much to say. I only ask that you try to read the first 15 to 20 chapters. The beginning is more of an introduction to the character,  characteristics, and motivations.

These chapters are definitely not to be skipped, but the novel's plot starts to develop after these first chapters.

I plan to release 2 chapters a day most of the time, but one day or another I may only release 1.

That's it. If you have any questions, ask directly in the chapters. (Sometimes, I won't see your comment here.)

I will develop the auxiliary chapter little by little, so it won't be so empty forever.

Update:

By far this is his best book ever and top 10 of all kingdom building on the platform the MC gains tragedy in the early chapters but it’s fine he comes back stronger then ever

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Read it through 240 chapter, finally feels it was good chapter to give it early review.
+the worldbuilding 9/10 : nicely explained throughout the the story and no unnecessary info dumps.
+the supporting character 7/10 : most of them was very well introduced and some of them still carry aura of mystery to them.
+the main character 6/10 : the mc (Vicente) was a neutral evil guy, he is ruthless to his enemy and caring toward his family. but he's character was sometimes feels bland like something is missing.  
+the plot progression 8/10 : nicely paced not too fast and not too slow but some of the subplot was really unnecess

My only gripe was in where mc and his group went to Pentagram hunting in the forest and they found the guys from magic academy who was attacked by beasts and decided to help them. no problem until this point although i prefer to let them die. but after this and up until the DEAL that he made with guy named joshua (chapter 293-240) because of pentagram that not even his was single the most idiotic and dumb deal that can be avoided. it makes me rethink all of his decision up to this point.

RVN has done it again, now we have a mobster in a magic world, for now 43 chapters but I think this may be one of my new favorite novels. Thank you for this piece, it works, keep it up RVN

At first, the book was intriguing, with a compelling storyline and strong adversaries. However, as the plot progressed, the repetitive cycle of the protagonist constantly facing new enemies became tiresome. What initially captivated me eventually became a tedious pattern, diminishing the overall enjoyment of the story. Ultimately, while the book had its moments, it ultimately fell short of being exceptional, settling instead for a mediocre narrative.

I gonna be honest here after reading first 200 chapters. The forced tragedy for a guy who on earth before his reincarnation was top tier in a mafia family but somehow and some weird reason he decided not to use that prior knowledge to get his situation better from the beginning? This is honestly dumb as f*** development not sure how this is ranked as high on the story dev side of things when it's all forced bs

Interesting so far.  when I saw there were only 9 reviews i wanted to be number 10 and unlock the ranking.

I am interested by the story so far, the development pace is not bad. The MC is quite intellectual and can plan ahead. I'm really curious to see where this will go and hope that it will continue to focus on the evolution of the ''family'' as whole. It would be quite refreshing to NOT have the MC simply outgrow everyone and have a ''solo'' story about him.

keep up the good work!

I love the character development…i hope more bloody