Takdir Yang Terlupa - Reviews

Maybe author write this for fun. Many useless explanations just to keep more word count. Why not just put your intention clear dont make your story complicated. Story and character is more generic type.

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Great first chapter for "The Bloodborne Heir," Bartholome! Alaric's journey from orphan to finding a loving family is heartwarming.  Subtle hints about his past leave the reader curious for more. Keep writing!

What i like from nover are : MC is using brain to defeat enemies, Not like other MC that OP from the start, The cheat than he can use is not that powerfull (he must find legacy), MC not womanizer until now, Novel flow is acceptable not fast or too slow.

In a secret place located in the Uchiha Clan's compound.

Cultivation: None

"Hayate-san I do hope he was of legal age at the time." Deidei says.

Okay, the story is there. you would be able to tell the writer has made the story carefully thought out. I like it, The protagonist is Set on destroying the world and escaping, even when he resonates with people, he doesn't forget his purpose. definitely worth read. I can see the potential.

Ahh yes, the canonical reviewing your own book... Pulling a GuiltyThree here. My intentions with this book is to write a story of survival, uncovering secrets and learning from the failures of both others and yourself, at the least. My plan may change so expect the unexpected. There will be at least one love interest and/or romantic relationship - hence the romance tag. However this will be later in the series I think, allowing our main character time to prepare a bit (Trust me he needs it). As the plot progresses, so will several internal themes within the main characters head.Expect violent adventures, desperate hunts for knowledge and when despair is most potent: the hope to reach the end by death or success.