TËSSÃ ãñd DARÆY - Reviews

Translation Quality - is readable, but not that great, there are times when i had to stop to think about what a paragraph meant, there are countless suggestions in the comments section but TL doesnt seem to look back to previous chapters so low rating from me.Stability of Updates - is good and perfectly acceptable in terms of speedStory Development - is great and im having a good time reading without too much of a complaintCharacter Design - is above average and acceptable, nice friendly and funny characters, while also having some of the usual tropes youll often see in chinese novelsWorld Background - is great, set in good old earth with eastern fantasy elements added in, rated 4 stars because there aint enough details about the mystical side yet..nice relaxing story to read, at the chapter im at the story has this slice of life vibe to it, while it is a generic story about a person getting a system and using it to improve his life and so on and so fort, as of now the mc is likeable and is prone to have a nice quite and peaceful life which is nice.the story lay out is pretty much-got system>system issues quest>stuff happens>rewards>improve life>repeat.. but still nice cause most stories like this always have an arrogant/stupid mc that wants to get paid, laid and gatorade... the mc in here is a nice and chill dude that just wants a peaceful life and maybe get a nice family in the future(but knowing CN novels and because he has a system this aint going in that direction).mystical elements are slowly being introduced, and also other characters seems to be shown to have some sort of knowledge of the occult. im already seeing where this is going, but as the way the author wrote to where i am at, i have some expectations.i know that the TL is probably busy to look back at previous chapters cause he is providing chapters at a fast rate, but still irks me seeing confusing grammar, and mistakes. seeing the comments giving suggestions posted a long time ago being ignored is surely gonna affect newcomers.

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The overall story is a bit different from regular reincarnation video game stories. The protagonist is totally OP. I do not really understand the logic of the GM considering his weapon as legit. The whole attachment should not exist in the timeline in the first . We need to find a sensible reason for the existence  of the weapon. The chapters are short in the beginning but eventually increase in length which is a good thing. The most disappointing part was to discontinue this story and create another book with a more detailed story line. I am disappointed because the new book did not catch up to this one yet.

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I really enjoyed this story, from the narration to the plot I thought it was put together quite well. I personally felt it was a little too short for me to invest in any of the characters though, since it just takes a while for me to attach emotionally to a fictional character in general. (especially if it's set up to look like that i.e. a dystopian/thriller) The writing was good, granted a couple of typos and other minor things that can be a pain to edit with so many words coming into play. Overall I enjoyed this story and the setting it takes place in. There was one thing that stood out to me though, and that was Ace. He is such a baby personality and I love him with all my heart. We honestly need more screentime for him along with a more in-depth description of what he looks like and a back story.

As other reviewers have pointed out, our MC in this story is not an OP lady out for revenge against the world. She was just an ordinary lady from modern times before she "crossed-over" into her new body of an orphan girl with adorable siblings (emphasis on adorable, I absolutely live for the scenes with the littles). At chapter 32, there's still no romance, but I really enjoy the slice-of-life pace as our MC tries to figure out how to navigate this new world and take care of her family.

Inside a luxury hotel room, a man in his thirties laid lifeless on the bed, staining the purely white bed linen red with his blood.