The story gets old fast. They introduce a new technology, monopolize it, and repeat. There's a little bit of daily life. Not exciting at all. Sometimes the protagonist make dumb decisions like fake death of princess. Why not head hunt the original inventors or counterparts? Learning some of the principles behind some technologies is ok.
I like the plot of the story. So far, the grammar is pretty good.So don't drop this story...............................................................
I stumbled upon this novelby chance, and I just want to say I'm glad I did! the storyline and characters are amazing! I couldnt put it down. please upload more chapters soon!
The guard was surprised to see that Max took the initiative to attack him, at first he thought that he was only being overconfident but as the punch get near him his expression turn pale. The energy covering Max's fist was that of an Advance Battler, meanwhile he was only an Intermediate Battler so he was incomparable to Max's strength.
"Yes, we were concerned about that and wanted to know what happened there. You should practice that it may come in handy. We will let you rest and come back later." replied Jimmy.
