Sword God Return - Reviews

wrong names, incomprehensible sentences, terrible grammar, despite the story seemingly interesting but its too hard to keep reading

Good development and please try to update on time.

Nice story though. Loving the story development.

Try to make the story at fast pace.
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It's always fun to see a flawed character gets the spotlight & readers would get to see their development. Very well written & easy to understand.

The transition between POVs in the 1st chapter could be done better, I think.

Would love to read more!