Sweet Revenge on my scumbag Ex - Reviews

nice story, at least the initial part. it looks predictable but i think author has more plans for the story, well this is my take on the story read this for something new.

The only anti-hero novel I love the most and follow is Dungeon Defense. Let's see if the MC in this novel can beat Dantalion :v I love anti-hero novel but there are too many anti-hero novel where the MC is cool af in the beginning arcs and gets boring and normal later. I hope this doesn't disappoint me from the anti-hero tagged novels. Can't wait for it.

I was hopeful for this novel I thought awesome he is going to use his knowledge of 20+ years to become stronger faster than anyone and master the dao. But no its clunky the plot if for lack of a better word stupid and boring. The overall plot outline is good but the execution is terrible. He comes off like an idiot in the first chapter when you learn he is eating a chicken he stole he see a girl rather than acting like a normal 20+ year old person and asking would you like some. He tells her (knowing almost nothing about this world mind you) to **** off. Then later talks about his maturity and knowledge WHAT. Then the author spends 15 odd chapters fucking around till something interesting happens and you think okay now hes going to become powerful and fight for his family or something nope nothing. He back his character into a corner saying if anyone see him do something amazing they will think he is posses or crazy. WTF. Very boring and disappointing.

It was good until the Girl came?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????...????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Jazz stood up he was about to go take a look at the situation outside suddenly he felt a pulling sensation and his attention was shifted on a treasure chest.

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Wasted potential!Take me out of this state I'm inGo somewhere I've never beenGot something trapped insideStill alive, where's that paradise?I thought by now I'd findRough justice is a long lifelineBack and forth between the desert and the seaWho I was and I will always beOh yeah, woo hooToo bad, woo hooSo sad, woo hooGet me out of this state I'm inWhen I spiral down, it's a vile spinGot something I can't hideStill alive, it's an overwhelming driveTo prevail and get out of this jailDust in my eyes and a tear in my sailBack and forth between the desert and the seaWho I was and I will always beOh yeah, woo hooToo bad, woo hooSo sad, woo hooTake me out 'cause I'm all aloneHair undone, despair unknownGot something trapped insideStill alive, it's a momentary rideI've been on a thousand years too longA thousand years too late for everything that's wrongBack and forth between the desert and the seaWho I was and I will always beOh yeah, woo hooToo bad, woo hooSo sad, woo hooOh yeah, woo hooOh yeah, woo hooOh yeah, woo hoo

Is there a continuation? When is it being published? Will it be in here the web again?

"Oh come on. Did the heat finally dissolved your brain?"

"Nah, I was the last to finish, the others are just catching their breath, so let's hurry up and go," Phoebe said as she raised her hands.

I bite off one of the branches of the fruits and acquired along with twelve of them.

And where did it originate from?