Swallowed Star 2: Origin Continent - Reviews

MC had a fiancée, she was possessed by a system OR went crazy and is using telekinetic powers to drive her ex fiancé crazy. It's a horror book in both forms. Poor author must have been influenced by dreams with cthulu and didn't even realize, he still thinks he's safe when in fact he's already had his mind stained with the madness of the great ancients.

I am rating this novel as 3.5 stars soley because of the fantastic concepts, world building, and character depth. That being said... this novel will likely never be completed. The author is terrible with updates. Do not ever believe their 'powerstones for extra chapters BS'. It never happens. If this novel were ever completed and in a book store (and edited of course) I would buy it in a heartbeat.

Angelic System More like Devil System legit kills someone for disrespectits a mehhhhhhh for me .......................................................

No matter how much I wanted to say I was being insolent, I truly wanted to know. I wanted to know why we were created, to what purpose these creators were playing a game.

"Was I so mean to her?"

"We someone to stay here. The others go back and report it."

Jika seseorang benar-benar mengerti bagaimana menikmati hidup, biarpun dia bisa hidup tapi sehari, itu akan cukup.

Continue please. Can I request some romance scenes to you ?

I really enjoyed the story and I hope to get the next part soon! I noticed some spelling mistakes, but I’m not sure if they come from the translator or if they are actually in the text. Either way, it’s an excellent novel! I especially liked how the protagonist, who once made others tremble, is now the one being hunted. Truly, hats off to you!I’d also love to hear your thoughts on my novels Between Shadow and Light and The Zodiac Mages.