Well, several characters have gender inconsistent. It's mood killer, especially for me who unable to guess character genders by their name. I'm just enjoying story, yet I'm confused by Protagonist's gender at later chapter. Hahaha
Meh, Translation so far is decent, worldbuilding is too fast paced and shallow, Idea is concrete but implementation is off, and content keeps jumping all over the case. it's another turn your head off book.
I've only just started reading this novel and so far i'm really enjoyig it but it seems to be missing a chapter between 21 and 22? part one of chapter 22's part two seems to be missing.
I got high hopes for this one at the beginning , but as I progress passed ch 30s, I noticed the wording became robotic to me. Yes, it appears to be properly translated but its lacking a bit of personality when I read it. Am I the only one who noticed it? ?
writing all over the place...please read some good novels .you have good idea but add unnecessary things in between .not very clear about what you're talking about .very irritating read.
