Why the hell is there such a big story gap between 117-118!? Suddenly he is no longer trying to catch a new pet and is now in a life and death battle with characters who were never introduced to us! This post is just to vent about how mad this made me cause I was enjoying it up till that point.
A great idea developed in a captivating way! The characters are amazing and I'm looking forward to keep witnessing their development. If you're looking for a read that will certainly get you out of boredom, this is it!
Amber Sword? But probably not as good as that. Hmm... Descent of the Magic God and Night Ranger. This book is gonna have some serious competition. I hope author treats the world as a real world and the 'ex' NPCs like humans or monsters... Or whatever their species is. MC acting like the whole world is his gameboard is outdated and well, impossible. Since ppl are real can we have proper effects of The Butterfly Theory and also his affect on timeline. His every action will suposedly be against the actual plot. So please... Give us some plot clashes and unexpected events. Now for the much awaited rating.Honestly, I can't see the book. Is it a bug??? So I am giving a one star to all of it. I am really sorry here. I tried to read and give proper ratings, but the books is probably too high tired for low levelers like me. I can see nothing! *sob*So one star. Really sorry. Maybe when I am able to see it again, I will start editing it. Cya. Hv fun. And qidan still doesn't has an 'edit' function. Wtf...
This book is great. It took common starting points and concepts and turned them into greatness.The characters are really well portrayed to the point that it's easy to understand who's who just by the way they act and talk. The game is really interesting, passing really well that there's no easy way for OPness, everything must be earned and that is absolutely amazing.The world is extremely interesting in-game and outside of it, making both sides become increasingly enjoyable to read.I hope the author come back to this great series ! And if you're reading this, mate, thanks for writing !
Thanks for the original hosting site WUXIAWORLD and the one who started the translation of this great novel. If you want to know that this novel is good ..... well go read the review in novelupdate and decide by yourself. BTW why this novel posted in qidian ? as far as I know this novel should be the right of wuxiaworld, right ? sorry for my ignorance because I do not see any statement from Ren (Wuxiaworld)
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This one has beautiful prose style of writing, one chapter just flows into another. There is well built anticipation, well placed descriptions and just the right pitch on royals inner place struggles. Going to the library to be enjoyed at leisure.
Review after 163 chapters.I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated.Nothing to say about the updates.The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic.The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful.In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily.Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly.The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations.Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected.To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.
The story is pretty fast paced, romance seems a little rush. More time with character development would definitely smoothen things out. Overall good story.
