supernaturals arise - Reviews

The translation is good. This story too is good for he loss and the games are realistic in my opinion and I think the nationalism here is lessen. I don't know, I have not yet read at the point where he you know go to America. Good job for the translation though..

Story Development 0/5*SPOILERS*. MC playing a game to get money cause he eats a lot and his wife needs a second job to feed his lazy ass. Character Design 0/5Author can't utilize his characters, keeps making empty characters that have no purpose. All antagonist characters are the casual trash talking for no reason character that you see in every bad novel.Idiot genius and overly powerful MC who trains his martial arts (he is already at the top there is no training in this novel). If he wasn't constantly saying that he is a martial artist we wouldn't be able to see it for ourselves, he can't remain calm and he always fight to short his troubles.World Building 0/5Too many inconsistencies. Author states on thing and he immediately changes his mind.Some examples:1) Author says in chapter 17 that since players were around level 10, MC has an area that spawns mobs over level 20 as his "personal playground" because no parties would go and farm there. In the same chapter we see a group of 16 looking to hunt a 45 level Boss at the spot MC was farming.2) He has a whole chapter (ch7) on some guys wanted to rob the MC. Author states that in REBIRTH players upon death wouldn't lose experience points but only their equipment. In the whole chapter author gives us the feeling that if MC dies he would have his items + gold stolen.Later on we see that even if someone dies he wouldn't lose items necessary (ch19) . Further into the story, we see a "friend" of MC getting ganged by a group. Afraid of losing his 10% exp he shouts for MC to come to rescue (cp21). So author changes his world to make some events work that wouldn't if he was true to his words. Overall score TRASH/5 , would read again!...:3..-:^)-.-.-.-:P--:3-.--:P-..:D..:')-.-.xD-.-

I’ve read up to chapter 125, and so far I’m liking the story! It’s definitely slow paced, but it doesn’t get boring. The story celebrates and builds on the small victories rather than have giant confrontations. I also really enjoy the characters! Each one feels important, and I like seeing them all work together.The only real criticism I have is the grammar. There are a lot of awkward sentences, but the intended meaning does get conveyed anyway. A little editing would make the book a smoother read.

the novel is great, but really a shame that chapter 50 and upward the chapters become pay2read, guess this is the end for me ciao ciao...............................................................

The Story Is Touching And Gives A Promise Of Comfort For People Going Through Similar Things Who Come Across It.

"Sure.." said Roshni and walked away.

After hearing these titles no one should ever hear in their lifetime, he was about to faint. But just before he did, a golden light came out from his chest.

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[You did foot massage you gain foot massage skill.]

However, At this time he didn't have any money. But Sora has countless ways to "get" money.

Author here.I hope this story is to your liking, and I apologise for the slow update. I just wanted to do longer chapters so it takes longer to write and edit... Would appreciate a vote or comment and any constructive criticism is welcomed.Suggestions are appreciated and may find their way into a side plot or storyline so please. Thanks

it's a very interesting piece  couldn't help myself from flipping through the pages❤️