Super warship - Reviews

Beautifully written

Honestly, it is hard for me to even rate it this highly. The english, grammar, and writing quality itself is subpar. The author really needs another person to go over his work. Its so bad it feels like a draft instead of the final work. The setting changes on a wim and the author seems to forget to tell us some info so we find it later. Almost seems like he is making it up as he goes. Its worse with the skills that are just deplorable how thought out and how badly it is used. None of the skills show proficiency, none of the monsters have a name other than monster until the author feels like it. Then there is the point of messed up names for the classes. The author seems to alive that the mcs class is something like a middle ground for supporters like a sorcerer or something but calls it a magician then another student has the magician class that isn’t support. The f is going on with the classes. Then u can just forget understanding the dialogue between characters bc the authors grammar fails to even explain what’ going on. Basically it is a novel that has an interesting concept that falls short on even the grammar much less the forced plot, and forced characters that are one dimensional ina way I thought wasn’t possible. Then there is the lack of world building that just limits the story even more.

that is a f***ing Interesting idea for a story premiseif this story has decent adversaries and predicaments, then we are gold........,............    .................................mmm

As the translator of this novel, I think the translation is great, but I do not give my permission to Qidian International, a.k.a. webnovel.com, to post this translation. According to international copyright law, it is illegal for webnovel.com to post this translation. I expressly forbid them to do so. Let me repeat myself. I, Deathblade, the translator of this novel, do not permit this translation to be posted anywhere except for wuxiaworld.com! Anyone else who posts it is a faceless loser!

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Não gostei da história, principalmente do protagonista. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

A very interesting book with an original,well-constructed idea and a flow with a steady pace. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys reading novels about technology and games,with a hint of romance. A few grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious

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it started off with a lot of potential the characters had an okay development, the story kept a good pace, and the power levels generally meant what was shown, but as time progressed the author began to pay less and less attention to his own world contradicting his own statements. additionally the power levels slowly became meaningless to the point where Alec and his group begin fighting not only with a tier 5 as a group of low tier 4 and tier 3s with alec and his golems being low tier 3s or lower, but a tier 5 with a time element when alec was literally told point blank by the system which has never been wrong that even a mid tier 4 would shatter him even with a low tier 4 ally and his golems just prior to him hitting tier 3. all of this is even before we get into the amount of filler and boring side stories the author pushes into his chapters or the constant repeat descriptions. if i had only read the first 100 chapters I would have rated this much higher, but the issues simply get to great over time. I would have dropped this story after around chapter 250-300 if i hadn't bulk bought chapters but even having paid for chapters up to around 500ish it has gotten so poorly handled that i am stopping by 450ish

Lara is quiet for a moment, then looks up. "Okay. But you need anything, you come right back here, yeah?" I can see the concern written plainly across her face.  

Tahimik na kaming muli hanggang sa makarating na kami sa club. Six na ng umaga at alam kong wala ng gaanong tao sa club. Tahimik na tinanggal ko ang seat belt ko at binuksan ang pinto nang kotse.