The story has a good plot and decent development. Though there are a few time skips it doesn’t give you everything at once which overloads the reader. The writing style is also pretty good. The author is kind enough to take suggestions from the readers which is an added bonus. The only issue would be the occasional grammar mistakes. Considering how often they update ad that they do it on their own plus the length of the chapters I’m surprised it’s minor things like plurals ever now and then which shows the author is good at writing.
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I will say it this is the best novel for 2019 in my opinion. I love it. All the other novel I read, I say it one of the best novel but this novel is different. To me if it continue like this, this novel will be in my top 2 out of 100 of 100 novel I have read In no time if it continue like this.
I read this book.... Like to say it has potential..... It has many plots..... It's good that writer is making fast process for MCs childhood...... But i would like u to slow down.
... When he reaches age of 15....,very nice book.. Should read........
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I am convinced..... This book is best..... Fast pace is really nice...... Op MC..... A system.... Complete loyalty...... Above the world MC........ What I love is story development... And Back ground description..... Will be popular for sure....
I reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy love the story the chracters are great the world build is good to keep up the good work.
Good Novel.
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