Substitute Lover [Entertainment Industry] - Reviews

amazing!! can we get more books like this one!!!

disgusted by the system and the dumb MC............................................................. . .. . .. .. .  ..   ,............... Б

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I don’t know if it’s lost in translation or the author is racist, but I’m pretty sure the author is racist extremely racist. How do you get into American basketball and be racist to African-Americans like he calls African-Americans sewer he considers a sewer creatures.

Overall, an interesting premise. I am sure that with the current situation, there will probably be more stories placed in this timeframe. The quality is pretty good overall, but there were a couple of parts where present and past tense were confusing as well as some dialogue that could be smoothed out. But that can all be fixed with an edit. The MC is pretty well developed, and props to the author for such long chapters. Keep writing!

He stopped for a moment and looked into her desire-filled eyes. "Please don't stop yourself." He whispered gently. "Kiss me back. I want you to be mine. But I want you to have me, too." Then he claimed hers again. This time teasing her gently, encouraging her, urging her to release her desire.

"Wait!" - said the voice.

I Walk like he told me and knock on the door. A soft and friendly voice answered me with:' Come Inside my dear. ' Like She knew that there wasn't a boy Who Knocked. I walked Inside and there was a Beautiful Woman Standing in front of me.

"Yes we are. We grew up together. Being an only child, he too hangs out with us that is with me and my sisters a lot" she offered.

Then, we head to our rooms to shower and my brothers are resting or taking a nap before dinner time.

"Yes, we are sorry we had to pull you away from there, but we thought the reason was good enough. You're doing very well in school, so we thought we should reward you. We have a little surprise in the garage for you."