Streaming of the Absolute - Reviews

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"Quiet down!" he hissed. "Back there my clones are facing Orochi-Bloody-Maru! The SNAKE SANNIN! He's here to steal your broody Uchiha's eyes! Now if you WANT TO HELP HIM by all means go on shrieking! I'll just have to cut your throat so you don't draw him down on us!"

"You two look like a mother scolding a daughter instead of a couple flirting"

Zack: "I never thought you have such an incredible talent." "Summit the bull and you will have the right to leave the village whenever you want."

He shook his head, unwilling for the moment to say another word, and then turned abruptly and walked away.

"Ok who wants to sit on the bench" Mac asks to Jerry and Jack.

Annie's POV: hi..my name is Juliana grace Leblanc but I go by the name Annie...I am 14 I have brother named Connor Leblanc he's 13 turning 14 tomorrow and I have a sister named Indiana but she goes by the name Indi She's 15 and I have a little sister named Hayley Noelle Leblanc but we Just  call her Hayley she's 10 yrs old and Indiana is planning to get Hayley adopted to someone but we don't know who yet so she's still staying with us...until for now Indiana made us not talk to her (this isn't real?)she just doesn't know Indiana told us to not talk to her

I sat down and they clapped their hands later on.

The door suddenly opened and another nurse came in.

So much to do, so much to see

I am enjoying the story, i am pleased to see its actually well written a lot of what i have read on here  has pretty bad English editing but this one is good.