Storial Order - Reviews

More chapters author, this is good

Starts alright but eventually becomes an endless cycle of arrogant young masters followed by faceslapping. Can't recommend this to anyone sane

So here I am surfing through Web Novel looking for Potential novels to read and I came across this and I'm like "Hmm I'll give it a try" and a hour later I end up reading all of it. My Opinion of this novel is that the MC is pretty Unique, A Immortal being older than the cosmos and that can't be killed.  The system too is unique, it's actually a race? Interesting.  I also love how the author puts in personalities and emotions in the characters involved. I also thought the way the MC would sell fate would be the same as others but the Author said "Nope this is a unique story" and I was so amazed reading it, intrigued even. I LOVE how every character that tries the stores products end up walking different roads and not the same plot. I have so many things I love about this novel I can only rephrase it as  I LOVE THIS NOVEL. ❤️? Please keep updating and don't give it up, it's simply so good I have to know the end!

A good book                 

Me encanta este libro, simplemente lo que necesito y busco.  Siempre busco libros de este tema y realmente me atrapa, no lo dejes caer autor este libro es muy muy bueno

Everythings good about it... Is what I'd like to say but I hate this story with every fibber of my being, the Mc could of easily escaped before he got scared for life, the author just HAD to use very VERY messed up depictions of cruelty like oh IDK maybe the 10 year old getting  R###ED BY A OLD MAN AFTER HER PARENTS SOLD HER, you're sick you discust me good day.

it's nice to see a fellow Indian write a novel. Although the English is kinda poor at some points, it's understandable so I don't mind. Anyways keep up the great work.

one of the best books I've read this far, amazing story with good pacing and a really good MC. I hope this story continues

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Great I really love it I hope you update soon!!!!I don't want to spoil anything for anyone so... Idk I need more to read like now!!!I love it so far and I'm dying for the next chapter!!!!!

The way you changed the writing style from the first chapter of the seconds arc is just amazing, I cant wait to see the next chapter!!!

I took one step into the room and felt a cold brush of air flowing into my face. I saw a pale cold hearted, black greasy hair guy standing by the window smoking.