Steam and Heart. - Reviews

A perfect story to change from the "standar" and rule for write a story, very funny de story and at this num of chapters is enjoyable to read

Dropped at ch 32. This is a very cliche Chinese story, which is made for 15 year old kids. So dont waste time on this novel.

First thing first, i only read up till' the 35 chapter. So, i can't say much. Every thing is great and has a lot of potential (it is too fast-paced for me though). Two things that irked me the most are the forced comedy and Jezzebeth's death. The forced comedy you can read it for yourself and see, it's not that bad though. The author don't give Jezze much screen time, and that sucks. When she died, we get some flashbacks of her time with the Mc. Like, if the author spend more time with her. Fleshing her out, giving her more life. The death would've been more impactful for us readers. The quality of the story would've been up a notch. I just hate characters with good potential get snuffed too early without shining.

11 chapters in 5 days! That's pretty good update rate. The story development and pacing is good. The world background is interesting. MC transmigrating into another world with advanced tech/knowledge has me anticipating! Great work!

Bits and pieces of various other novels badly pieced together. Not an ounce of originality. There must be hundreds of beast taming novels on this site by now, yet the protagonists always have the same few pets. I only read a few chapters and there are already so many red flags.The story takes place a mere 17 years after a literal apocalypse, yet we have a fully functioning society with advanced knowledge on spiritual energy (which is new) and genetic technology. I can guarantee that later in the story we’ll have a whole bunch of old masters and old experts full of knowledge on beasts as if they had been learning the stuff their whole lives and not the same amount of time as literally anyone else who’s at least in their twenties.The protagonist died because he killed a mosquito, which is a big no-no because mosquitoes are now super poisonous and if you touch them you die; yet later we learn that in his previous life the protagonist was a member of a beastmaster’s entourage and he was the team’s survival expert… the beastmaster was naturally a female beastmaster and died, I’m sure in this new life he’ll get the chance to save the jade beauty and add her to his collection.His first pet is a bear… so unoriginal it hurts. At some point I’m sure he’ll get a green caterpillar and the usual dragon or phoenix.He lived a pathetic life and by the time he died 10 years later, he never even managed to gather enough money to buy the awakening potion. Despite that he has tons of convenient knowledge he should not have had acess to, considering he should have been busy trying to survive at the bottom of society.All in all i’d say read it only if you’re new to Webnovel or the genre.

I don't think my review has any real meaning coming from an inexperienced writer suchas me, but I'll give my views on the story anyways.So from the first few chapters, there were many, many descriptions. Much so that it cut some fights and actions halfway, leaving me in awkward reads once in a while (though that's what I just observed).There was also shifts in narration perspective, leaving me confused from time to time on whether the narrative of thestory is infirst-person or in third-person omniscient (I just figured out that every chapter that starts with "memories of..." is in first-person perspective, so yeah).I also wasn't too invested between the characters, you know, having too many introduced in the first few chapters. It left me feeling like "I don't really care if Velsado dies or whatevs..." and more of like "When are the powers and magic stuff gonna come again?" Yes, I think I'm back to being a nine year old.Although many things broke my immersion with the story, I really found the richness of the worldbuilding complete. The concepts of the story is unique, and I honestly don't know where the story will go (Although being predictable once in a while is a good thing). The many characters interacting with the world events, it really felt like a very much solid story where I don't think plotholes will arise (unlike in mine where I'm still fidgeting to fix loose ends).If you reached this part of my review, then thank you for reading. Hope you'll kinda get something out of my review although I'm still new to writing myself. I just limited my review to the writing quality, story progression, characters, and worldbuilding if that's okay.Cheers!

Why???? Why author?! Just why must you break my heart?!It was such a good novel. I was beginning to like it and you dropped it.Now I'm sad ?.........

A beautiful bard with a seductive gaze A bloodthirsty brute wielding a giant ax And a skillful fighter just pissed...himself....wait...hold up...omg is he???..is he crying???? This basically sums up this convoluted ragtag group of mercenaries that Tycon ends up leading. Imagine all the Isenkai anime you have seen after the popularity of Sword Art Online and combine it with a chaotic nature of a Dungeon and Dragons game, and this...ladies and gentlemen is what you end up with. Funny and Memorable moments: Check Bloody Gore and Acts of Violence: Check Overpowered Isenkai character with an A.I assistant to give you world exposition for any questions you may have: DAMN StraightI love this novel and what it has to offer. It is definitely worth the read.

this is a hidden gem! i like the story, the character development, the world background, and the story is not rush which is i liked the most! i loved you novel author-san<3 i hope this novel continue until i grow old hehe

Overall very average 3.5/5The writing quality is sub par and just reads poorly.The story itself is flat lacking pull.  There’s a fixation on gods and trying to touch upon the human psyche which comes off very convoluted.It is an interesting attempt at the over saturated idea of tower climbing for humanity. If you’re bored it’s a moderately entertaining read with room for improvement.

It was good until you started trying to make him a "good" person when I was looking for a mc the destroys everything and then I tried to push on but...it was to much when you dropped a baby on the  10 year old mc's lap forcing him to take care of it...which he does(because it looks like his sisters)...

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