Starting With One Million Luck Points free - Reviews

Is only my mind this dirty?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

Espero que sea elegida......................................................................................................................................................................

overall great story plot and different writing style than what I've seen in other stories here.  excited to see where you go with this story :)

Love alien tech so much and completely hooked with the story. Nice development, fast paced, understandable language and makes it very easy to read. Loving it so far and can't wait for more.

In my opinion this is great. The only thing I do not like about the story is that sometimes it seems like the MC has plot armor. (when he was a leech)

"No...it's too revealing" my eyes capture one black off shoulder dress with shinning stones at the front wow my inner voice spoke.

"hey  vane"  naruto grinned as they fist bump each other

i have plenty of lights

And it made her more angrier than she already is.

"No way in hell I would let you have Tan!!!" Hiruzen argued.

this is a overall very good novel to read

This is my first story, and I'm so happy to see it here! I hope you guys like it. I hope D.J's struggles and the healing he and his friends will find along the way mends at least one broken heart out there. Much love, folks <3