Starting With A Space Battleship - Reviews

TD:LR: Hidden machine translated novel for double the price of original works.

While a tad dry read for the first 40 chapters with some weird plot holes and hypocrisy, at chapter 41 the editor stopped caring and the story becomes a mess. Not to mention it costs 2 passes for a single chapter. I spent those 2 passes just to verify what others have said and read the 40 chapters to make a fair review. If you're going to be a scammer with machine translated novels, be up front about it. Otherwise you get the 1-star review.

Translation turned to trash after 40 chapters

Dropped at chapter 70. Writing quality becomes horrendous after chapter 40. Gender pronouns constantly messed up. Names translated several different ways so you never know who is talking. Sentences occasionally being complete nonsense. Paragraphs will occasionally miss punctuation entirely. So you dont know if someone is talking or thinking. It's just confusing and hard to read. Not to mention zero information is given on world back ground. That includes the game world.
then there is the newbie characters able to get equipment/mechs that one shot God like beings.
I really tried but it is very hard to enjoy in its current state. Needs an editor desperately. Then maybe a chapter or two added to the beginning dedicated to building the real world and game world. Maybe the MC history.

This MC is just sad.

He gets betrayed by his girlfriend who he wished to marry. His father was brutally killed by scum of society. He gets scammed by capitalist bussiness owners on frequent basis. When he pleads innocent to bystanders and police they never believe him. And his family survives on scraps. Yet this MC still preaches about the goodness of humanity.

What's with this faulty characterisation? A person who went through so much in life can't possibly be a virtuous, upright, person.

Did I mention this MC dies in a game which somehow mysteriously transmigrates his soul back in time? Implying that being killed in a game, killed him in real life too. What is this? SAO?

This story has more plot holes than swiss cheese.

Free chapter were edited to make it look good...after chapter 40 it became bad very fast...no editing at all...just mtl....just delete your translation group its just trash...you should be ashamed of yourself for doing such a bad job

Garbage translation. The fact that some names aren't even capitalized after the free chapter are over should say enough.

1) translations after 40 sucks.
2) it takes 2 tickets to unlock a trash translation chapter.
3) since it's like this I can only say good bye.

after chapter 40 the Grammer and editing goes down by alot, the character name keep getting switched around and alot of other editing problems.

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Give me more scifi! Mama needs her spaceships

They translated this properly for the free chapters so they can try to scam you for the paid chapters. No effort MTL-like chapters after chapter 40. What a waste of time. And I thought I found another novel to read here. What trash

Starts well, and then both the story and the translation get worse and worse until both are trash.