My only problem is the grammer, you put "u" instead of "you", that's why I gave it 3 stars and 5 on word building. I suggest to the improve on the grammar and spelling, maybe use something like Grammarly which is quite cheap and would help the author to improve.
Although the novel sounds like a copy of Jay Aslan, this one has a lot of originality put into into it. I suggest the other readers to give it a try and see if this is for you or not.