Sparks of Ruin - Reviews

Sparks of Ruin
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Just average, went through mtl until the end, still thought stopping a few times. A few annoying moments such as repeating the same situation from point of view of MC and then other characters, just this alone could shorten the novel by 30% for sure and maybe even more. Another repetite moment is when optic brain solves everything, as opponent does something MC analysis through optic brain and just solves it, and its done. Moreover, another annoying thing is author forgetting parts of the story, not often but around 3-5 times, still impacts the experience. The ending was quite abrupt and anticlimactic, I am sure without all that repetite stuff the novel would have lasted much longer with better ending.I quite like the whole concept of assistance from a super brain in form of optic brain or some form of artificial intelligence, the best to date is Warlock of the Magus World where MC is already intelligent and the A.I. chip is just giving wings to the tiger, but in this case the writting is lacking. Still good effort
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There is a tradition for all authors to give their books a five star so here I am to follow the tradition and give my book a shameless five star. The MC curses a lot in the beginning but give him some time and he'll learn how to control his mouth. Read it and find out for yourself if you like it or not (;
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Good book. Keep up the good work and make sure you continue updating
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In fact, now that Sara was pulled out of her grief, she was suddenly questioning where she was exactly.
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"No, this is an official business."
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Her teacher seemed unimpressed. She wrote something in an open textbook on her desk, then continued down the list of names.
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Jay was your average teenager like watching tv
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That home was at the side of her most beloved.
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The solicitor's voice stopped in mid-sentence. That was undoubtedly the result of the same look Ian had once successfully employed to correct any breach of military discipline among his troops.
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"You lead" he replied "I will follow"

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