Cool concept for a Mc distrust of organisations due to past life. Mc was a very skilled assassin loner orphan betrayed by organisation that raised and trained him, almost survived....
The Mc heart starts to thaw when the hosts body he transmigration to is the elder brother of an pair of siblings, their family that has been slaughtered and he's the Mc is saved by his younger brother.
The Mc accept his new life and family, triggering the system which he distrust as to him he feels its like the previous organisation issuing missions etc.... interesting concept, wanting to control his own life destiny not be dictated but missions from the organisation system.
The writing style is clean and gets u attached to the characters. There is a few minor grammar issues once in a while could be predictive text. but easy to work out.
Very enjoyable keep up the good work.
